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Think letter-writing isn’t important anymore? Think again. Whether
sent via e-mail or the U.S. Postal Service, the written word is still
essential to client communications. Knowing how to construct and compose
a good business letter is a critical part of successful dealings with
customers.
Why are letters important in the age of text messaging? A letter
lasts forever. OK, maybe not forever. But it surely outlasts a Twitter
message. I think of every real estate letter as resume—a part of your
identity. Each letter that accompanies your name and business card tells
consumers a little bit about who you are and why they should do business
with you. I will first talk about hard-copy letters, and then provide
some tips for e-mail correspondence.
The Elements of a Business Letter
There are some basic elements of a business letter that should
generally be included with every piece of correspondence you draft:
- Date
- Your Address
- Inside Address (Recipient’s Address)
- Salutation
- Body
- Closing
- Signature
- Printed Name
- Enclosure
- Reference Initials
Professional Format
While there are a few main types of business
letter formats, the full block
is the most popular today, and it’s also the simplest style to
implement. With the full block format, all paragraphs are
single-spaced and flush left of the document. The following is an
example of a full block letter which incorporates all of the essential
elements.
Month, Day, Year
Recipient’s Name and Address
Salutation,
Body:
Single spaced, with line between
paragraphs. Hi, my name is [Agent’s
Name], and I just sold the home at [Listing Address] in your
neighborhood. Are you considering a move, or, would you just like
to know the value of your property?
Either way, call me for a free price evaluation on what your house
might be worth on today’s real estate market. I’ll be glad to
provide this information for you at no cost and no obligation. I hope
you’ll welcome your new neighbors to the area, and please keep my
business card on file if I can help you in any way.
Closing (Thank you),
Signature
Printed Name
Enclosure (omit if there's no enclosure)
Typist’s initials
(omit if you typed the letter yourself)
Although this letter did not incorporate the subject or enclosure
lines, the major elements of the business letter are included. Make sure
you check your margins and spacing before printing your letter. Most
word processor programs include a “print preview” button that will show
you what the letter will look like prior to printing. This feature
can help you adjust any discrepancies your letter format may contain.
Having your letter positioned correctly on your stationary will lead to
your positive and professional image.
Your Message: Give it a Nice Ring
Now that you have a general guide and plan for your business letter,
making your document ring with a compelling reason for your reader to do
business with you is important. Here are a few tips to keep in
mind when writing your letter:
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- Remember who you’re writing to.
Avoid high tech jargon or other confusing words that the reader may
not be familiar with. Write with simple, easy-to-understand words
that the reader can understand.
- Be specific and clear.
Most people do not want to read a long-winded letter, so keep your
letter concise. Have an objective when you write, and avoid
covering details that are unnecessary for the reader.
- Proved something of value.
Offering something of value to the reader can be a good way to keep
interest and get future business. The right kind of value to the
reader can sometimes be a clever way to make a connection and the
possibility to do business in the future.
- Ask for the business.
Don’t be afraid to ask for the business within your business
letter. Most good letters will attempt to close the sale with the
reader.
- Close with something positive or a
thank you. Finally, closing
your letter with an upbeat statement or a thank you is a win/win
situation for you as the real estate professional. After all, the
reader did take the time to read your letter, why not end with a
positive closing.
- Check your spelling and have a
friend proofread. Use
Spellcheck and, especially if you're sending the letter to many
people, ask a trusted friend or colleague to proofread. You want to
provide a polished, professional image, and typos will detract from
that.
Rules for Good E-mails
E-mail can be a bit more informal than letters sent
through the U.S. mail. However, there are several good rules to follow
for effective e-mail communication with clients and colleagues. Follow
these rules, even if you're just sending a quick update e-mail to
buyers. You always want your message to give a positive reflection of
who you are.
First, make sure your e-mail address is
professional. Avoid using silly and off-beat e-mail addresses that
contain slang or nicknames.
Next, use the subject line of the e-mail wisely. It
should be short, descriptive, and compelling. Just as with a regular
letter, the e-mail should open with a salutation.
For the body, avoid indenting and using special
backgrounds that could be distracting or make it difficult for the
recipient to read. The tone of the message should be professional; avoid
using smiley-face emoticons or making jokes—humor is personal, and it's
even harder to understand when it’s in writing.
Close with a salutation and your contact information.
Most e-mail programs allow you to create a “signature” with your name,
address, and phone number. The signature can be automatically added to
the end of each message.
Finally, e-mails should be short and easy to
read. Lengthy e-mails can be a big turnoff. Show your prospects and
clients that you respect their time, and keep your message to the point.
Use Letters to Stand Out
Understanding and implementing the essential elements
of a business letter and e-mail can help you stand out from your
competitors and prove that you're attentive to detail—the right person
for the job. Remind yourself the next time you sit down to write that
letter or e-mail that this piece of correspondence will tell consumers a
lot who you are as a professional. It just might be the difference in
getting your next transaction
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